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come on people would like your advice guys
Just need a capital G on garden services. The only thing I may change is the following. The whole leaflet for me gives the impression of a professional garden business, but I don't really feel that having 'Fence Painting' as one of your main bullet points really works. Painting fences while is certainly something that we can do, its a fairly low skilled task in itself so I would replace it with a more skilled job - maybe fence repairs if you do it?
That's my two pennies worth anyway - good job!
many thanks simon and understand ur point and it had croseed my mind that also
Quite a few typo errors Phil, have a close look and redo. Are the pictures your own work or nabbed from the web ?. If your using capitals at the start of each main word, then keep it throughout the flyer headers. Mixing upper and lower case texts doesn't look good. Just my first impressions. (EDITED) Spacing after the coma's need fixing as does the space after you email address.
Ok Phil, second line might need a capital letter for Services, third line might need a capital letter for Garden. Your website address is missing a 'w', and finally a capital letter for Street in your address would look better. Overall I think it's a good clean design, clear and impactive, well done
Steve w.
yeh its still work in progress and changing part
a graphic designer i know is doing it for me
Not sure if it's just me but the logo looks like the guy is toiling pushing the mower. Phil, that's a lot of basic errors for a graphic desingner to be making.
been told he looks old and pregnant
Probably just me being over critical Phil, I spend 20 years in the print and publishing world before mib was born
Phil Shaw said:
its fine thats why posted it for people views and thoughts as i am new to the business & marketing site so any advice is good for me and learning too
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