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Permalink Reply by Simon Smith on May 4, 2012 at 20:06

I would either have a different coloured header bar for the catagories or at least enlarge them, it took me a few moments to notice them at all.

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Permalink Reply by Craig Downey on May 4, 2012 at 20:21

I am not english master, but on your first sentance you have "And" and "But" after a full stop.  You About page is more of a testomony (sp) page.  otherwise not bad

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Permalink Reply by Colin Hunt on May 5, 2012 at 13:19

Please don’t take this as criticism - it's an observation.  There are a number of grammatical errors on your front page as Craig has mentioned, which seem to have overflowed onto the testimonials page, along with very similar phrases, suggesting the same author. 

It is so important to get the basics right as this will be the potential customer’s first contact with you, so spell and grammar check before going on line and I would take another look at the testimonials.

 

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Permalink Reply by John on May 5, 2012 at 19:09

I am sorry Bengi, but the previous LJN members did not have their

readiing glasses on.

Exactly where is your image gallery, or work already completed ?

   

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