Its looking better Alan, not quite the finished article.
HOW EVER, dont forget what we spoke about the SEO for your site: TITLE - is still not working, wrong words in there, in here this needs to be what somebody will initially search for you - i..e gardener cumbernauld, grass cutting, maintenance - max. of 60 characters!
Also the KEWORDS are not quite correct. People wont know your name, so you are wasting space putting Alan... in there, repetitive use of words can be damaging to search results, bringing you DOWN the list of results; you want to be on the top page.
Email me personally again to discuss this further or call me.
Its nice Alan, hope it brings in the business.
Have you got any links with other businesses in the area - that might link your website to theirs? Suppliers or parallel businesses? Just a thought to get more traffic.
ooooooooooooooo posh get you well done alan its better than mine , lol
here we go, the good bits first.
I really like the soft look of the site and the small snippet comments; A beautiful "lawn" for your home or office is just a phone call away. very catchy and not seen on many other sites.
Your wording on the site seems straight to the point and will adhere will with the site visitor, confidence and the words well mannered spring to mind.
heres the duff bit
I got advised to change the word "Aim" (on my site) almost means that you will try and not always succeed, perhaps you could use "Will" its more definate and goes with the confident look of the rest you have written.
The concluding words to you opening sentence "if possible" says to me thats would you really want to do, if you are looking for regular clients perhaps you could change that word to "if required"
apart from that, I'd like to see a long striped lawn on the left of you home page.
I wish you every success, you have a lovely website.
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